Get Your Premium Membership

Lost Souls

Where are you? My search takes me everywhere I find nothing Moving through the maze of life Hope guides me But grows weak with time Who are you? Someone from the past Or the future The hardest question to answer I wait for the answer But where will it come from Two souls moving through existence Are you searching as well You ask where am I? I’m neither here nor there Lost in thought But I wait eyes, heart and mind open Will you arrive Or will we forever be lost Who am I? I often ask myself the same question The answer also complicated Yet I’m simple A person of few needs You are one of those Looking for direction from you Where are you? Another one of my first attempts at poetry. I sent this to myself on June 4 2012, so it was written around that time. It was another attempt to leave the sonnet and venture into free verse. I didn't want to be limited by fxed form, but have since learned how much I actually enjoy fixed forms of poetry. The villanelle, Qautern, Quatrain, now the Terzanelle, and of course my original, the Shakespearean Sonnet, without the iambic redundancies of course, or should I say the iambic pentameter. I had read Lucilla Carrillo's poem Where are you, and reminded me of these words, although I think the two themes are different.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/12/2014 5:24:00 PM
The search of purpose is indeed the our journey for OUR purpose. Great piece, Wayland. Deep thoughts expressed in this honest piece, Great free verse piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/11/2013 4:29:00 AM
AND THANK YOU FOR CHECKING ME OUT TOO ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/11/2013 4:08:00 AM
ENJOYING YOUR POETRY, you had my eyes locked on till the end manipulating much emotion... thanks for that one ;-) Denise
Login to Reply
Bunch Avatar
Wayland Bunch
Date: 12/11/2013 4:25:00 AM
Thanks for reading and your lovely comment.
Date: 4/4/2013 10:06:00 PM
Hi Wayland this is a beautiful piece. I like this style... the self-search. Yes we have to ask ourselves these questions from time to time
Login to Reply
Date: 3/17/2013 3:18:00 PM
I'm glad that my poem reminded you of this one and I'm glad that you decided to post it. It is really good. it is a little different, I wish you would post one in spanish. I bet it would be good. Thank you for your comments on my poems. I am not that good of a writer. I just write because that is what I like to do. Thanks for sharing your work here, Lucilla
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs