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Lost Souls

what do i do to fill these holes is it possible to bring back the lost souls this war has gone to far it is more destructive then i dying star ive lost all the people that care now my heart is just a burning flare the children only cry because they have to so many die

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Date: 5/21/2011 7:17:00 PM
Very touchy and moving write, dennis
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Date: 5/21/2011 7:05:00 PM
WAR is terrible and innocent lives lost along with enemy lives dennis.. my youngest son is now in military stationed in Libya luv.. surely your lines have touched my heart and thankxx for your kind words on my newest poem..luv..
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Dennis Bishop
Date: 5/21/2011 10:30:00 PM
i am very sorry to hear about your son. i may only be 15 years old but the war affects my life. i am living in constant fear of loseing my friend who was sent into the war by his father. i havent heard from him in 3 months

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