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Lost Mayans Ancients who lived long go Living for the sun and waning moon Some hoped to be living by noon Children laughed in the maize fields As elders struggled for the grasshoppers wisdoms Life was simple Daily toils and simple strife Intermixed with love and social struggles Lost Mayans Sifting in my dreams The ancients have had many a princess As have I We both are buried deep within our dreams Longing for days when love kissed our salty lips Wine flowed like riverbanks at their brink Only when the waters ebbed did the sadness make the noon Now the Mayans are but stories in a book I often wonder Who am I? If not a line In someone else’s story Skeletons of love Inside a burnt out heart For I myself have nothing to tell Being lost long ago

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/31/2016 3:25:00 PM
"I often wonder who am I? If not a line in someone else's story" ... really deep stuff here, Arthur. I love the blend of the history and romanticism. When I was little I had a strange obsession with Aztec culture ... makes one wonder how today's world will look like in the future ... just lines in a story.
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Date: 8/21/2016 7:37:00 PM
Wow..you weave love, history and philosophical ponderings exceptionally well.:-) The language is stunning, the imagery just breathtaking, and the small words are "large" in emotion with a "wallop" of meaning :-) A deeply sad piece, expertly crafted. This really is a pleasure to read.:-) blessings, lynn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/21/2016 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Lynn Marie! :)
Date: 8/7/2016 8:21:00 PM
such a sad poem my friend:-( hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/21/2016 8:31:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I missed this comment, thanks to Soups new improvements! LOL
Date: 8/7/2016 6:56:00 PM
Excellent write Arthur. Am I just a line in someone else's story?..fantastic
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/7/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Tim!
Date: 8/7/2016 6:09:00 AM
How beautifully you get hold of the river ... how historically the Mayans ... beautiful ...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/7/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Probir!

Book: Shattered Sighs