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Lost Love

The numbing pain from many yesterdays, lay buried under the frost of loneliness. Memories fall like dead pine needles, covering the trodden path I always travel, crumbling beneath my weight. I walk this road lonely as each failure, echos in the hollow of my palms, open..empty, now trembling at my sides. I silently fall to my knees, in anguish, for decisions made. There's nothing left but a cold winter's breath and footprints pressed into the ground. Reminders, of where you once stood, long ago. 10/28/15

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Date: 10/28/2015 10:54:00 PM
Deeply emotive Frederic! perfect seven for wonderful expressions!
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Date: 10/28/2015 10:25:00 PM
It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. What a beautiful poem.^^
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/29/2015 3:14:00 PM
Been here for a few years now, my first poem on here was long ago..thank you never the less..
Date: 10/28/2015 9:42:00 PM
Your words are original and uncliched. (Is uncliched a word?) beautiful use of imagery.
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Date: 10/28/2015 7:21:00 PM
frederick,i see you have crafted this verse with such mellow weave down memory... just lovely!.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2015 8:47:00 PM
thank you nette, actually it was a practice session to explore and let my mind go where it went.

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