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Lost Love

The sunset shimmers, And reached the horizon, Heralding day's demise. The hidden thoughts, wrapped with love, Burning like an ember. The conscience glimmering, With chims and whistles, Adding the agony of mind.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 8:06:00 PM

nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/30/2015 4:58:00 PM

Smrithi Sathish, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2015 12:02:00 PM

- Welcome to P- Soup, Smrithi :) - Thank you for your first poem :) - A nice poem - I'll be glad to read more from you in the future :) - I wish you good luck with your poems and comments - // Anne-Lise :)

Smrithi Sathish
Date: 7/2/2015 10:53:00 PM

As a beginner,your encouragement is really precious to me. I'l try my best to make it much better. Thank you mam.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2015 11:58:00 AM

sMRITHI, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Smrithi Sathish
Date: 7/2/2015 11:01:00 PM

Thank you mam! I'm very happy to be a part of your community. I will write more poems and expecting your support.