Lost-Love

The world so big with a hudge crowd...where i lost my beloved...a friend i had who left me and shattered me and made me die...tell me why i am here,where they are with smiling faces in the race of life...i suffered a loss,now feeling shy...tell me why i am here...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 12:07:00 AM

dewa, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/22/2015 7:34:00 PM

BASIT :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/1/2012 6:40:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life Basit. Love, Carol

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 4/27/2012 3:04:00 PM

hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did