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Lost It All

Love and Hate will congregate but never collide inside with all the hearts that are beating- My swoon is leaving- sanity deleting with one keystroke (on your piano....) And I can't live without this- the bliss that's inside- a kiss for humanity such profanity in the way! oh I don't want this to end. don't want this to- and I cant fight out I can't find a way out- of my skin. This is the one want to be in- forever or so ago. Leave me out!!!! I can't go back inside...back again. in my place that I can't stand much long. oh I can't find a way I lost it all along the way can you help me find the way you lost it all the way back home but that doesn't help your cause hold your applause and kill your mind....(and spend some time with me) And... Leave me out!!!! I can't go back inside...back again. in my place that I can't stand much long. do you like me for me? can you tell me to see the light? inside-inside-inside-inside-inside-INSIDE!!! (Musical Break) Leave me out!!!! I can't go back inside...back again. in my place that I can't stand much long. 'cause I lost it all...

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Date: 3/11/2011 2:13:00 PM
Interesting work....Congratulations on going through the first round...Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Ryan. Love Carol
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:57:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:36:00 AM
first like 2 say thanks 4 reading my peoms and 4 the comments. your poems r deep and makes one say thats was good
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:53:00 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Ryan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2010 9:45:00 AM
well done...TAH
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