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(Free Verse) I am doomed here, weeping in blackness born Finding my way through this dusty threshold Heart is bleeding and...torn. This love so betrayed A surreal abyss, Thrown away fade Yet I wish for Your warmth so alive more I am dying here, weeping in blackness doomed Falling through this darkened tomb, Heart so empty and bleak consumed This heart so betrayed, A deathly void Forgotten laid Yet I wish for Your lips so warm... more I am chained here, lost in the night, Thirsting through this evil emptiness, Heart so black and ...bleak alight This darkness so stricken, A red void, Forgotten...quicken Yet I wish for Your blood so warm and...alive more... Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 copyright@2009 December,12,2014

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Date: 12/13/2014 12:50:00 PM
Excellent poem on innocence, my lovely friend. A nice picture of lost heart is also adorned here. 7 ahead. Loved always,bl
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:56:00 PM
Enjoy the darkness as well as the light...keep putting the pen to the paper deep into that neverending night
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Date: 12/12/2014 6:30:00 PM
Gosh! That's a lovely poem. It's dark but very vibrant. Well done.
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Date: 12/12/2014 5:50:00 PM
Dorian, deep and dark, nice write. Blessings, hugs, Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/12/2014 5:36:00 PM
chilling poem Dorian deep and dark hugs
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