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Lost In Your Eyes

Lost in your eyes my passions rise. Emotions burn as flames ignite your heart beating in time with mine toasting our love with champagne wine lovers celebrating the night. Your heart beating in time with mine we dance in enchanted moonlight embracing till the stars take flight toasting our love with champagne wine. Lost in your eyes your heart beating in time with mine pulses race as feelings excite toasting our love with champagne wine my passions rise. My passions rise lost in your eyes.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/13/2018 10:23:00 AM

Interesting form so conducive to dreamy nostalgia such as this. Well done, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/18/2016 9:07:00 PM

Just a beautiful write Emile, so soft and elegant in it's tone, loved the refrain with the twist at the end. A7 for sure

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/19/2016 7:40:00 AM

Thanks John, I can always count on you to brighten my day. Emile.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/30/2016 8:47:00 PM

An Emile version of a Pantoum said the woman with an intermediary knowledge of forms. I have an excellent knowledge about what resonates and/or is beautiful poetry to me and myself. I loved the content and the repeated emphasis the lines gave, they worked, weren't redundant just to be redundant, but added depth to the emotional drama. Beautiful work, Emile ... CayCay

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2016 8:52:00 AM

Thank you so much CayCay, I'm so happy that you like this poem, it is one of my favs. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/30/2016 3:03:00 PM

You are so great at writing in forms Emile. This is wonderful! I simply cannot do well with repeating lines. I bow to your talent Emile. This is lovely and romantic! ; ) 7

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2016 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Connie, your kind words have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2016 12:36:00 PM

Simply beautiful Emile

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2016 4:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Tim, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Emile.