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~Lost In Your Desire~ (Tanka) Know you're in my heart and in my head and my blood Forever love you that in this will never stop feeling way I do for you Since you came to me I just fell in love with you Thrilled with all this true love that grows in me and stays strong and nothing for me the same Now I'm lost in you You're voice is so seductive Feel fire of your love your hands are all over me and now in your Love I'm lost Burning in your fire is your love that keeps me warm one that keeps me sane In the night my name you whisper and just quench in your desire. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 February.14.2015

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Willie A. Buchanan

Date: 3/25/2015 5:22:00 AM

Very good,babe! I like. A 7 ! Soul mate love is very powerful. Thanks for your visit and comments. Check out,"WECOME HOME FROM THE NUT HOUSE." Have a nice day.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/25/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Willie, for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

James Fraser

Date: 2/26/2015 2:07:00 PM

Beautifully romantic poetry Dorian, hugs, James :) xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/26/2015 9:33:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,James, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Daver Austin

Date: 2/26/2015 11:05:00 AM

A tanka love chain - Enjoyed. Love, daver

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/26/2015 9:32:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Daver, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/16/2015 8:50:00 AM

Beautifully executed !! Love !! Just the right amount of steam !!....Thanks for dropping by my page and for the lovely comment on my poem.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/16/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Debra, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/15/2015 7:29:00 PM

Dear Dorian, Wow girl this poem is on fire, what a personal work on your loving feeling, lol Love the whole poem it's flow of very is just elegant and a pure pleasure to read from bottom unto top, I read twice over and it is hot, excellent, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/16/2015 5:20:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Cheri, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/15/2015 12:47:00 PM

Heart is floating in which only love is there. Beautifully done my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 2:08:00 PM

Thank you so kindly BL, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Bill Smith

Date: 2/15/2015 11:51:00 AM

Very HOT

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 2:07:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Bill, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/15/2015 11:39:00 AM

Great love poem Sweet D in Tanka Form.Love

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 2:05:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Rajat, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/15/2015 6:37:00 AM

This was awesome! Hope you had a great Valentines day, keep sharing that Love!!! ;)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Casarah, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/14/2015 10:15:00 PM

Excellent. Happy valentine. Enjoy. Tfs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 12:00:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Ravi, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/14/2015 7:55:00 PM

Love this poem of yours my dearest girl, i want to write more, hope fully tomorrow, but I wanted to tell you happy Valentines day, I have to get up super early in the morning, other wise I would say more, sweet dreams and have a peaceful night, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 11:58:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Cheri, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! You're always so sweet to me, thanks!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2015 4:59:00 PM

such a beautiful romantic write Dorian 7 :-) Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Jan :)for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! You're always so sweet to me, thanks!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2015 4:30:00 PM

This Valentine Day has been very inspiring, Dorian! May love's desire stay alongside you every day (and night) of the year! #7 hugs // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Paul :)for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! You're always so sweet to me, thanks!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Cupids Arrow

Date: 2/14/2015 4:10:00 PM

You have been hit by an arrow...so beautiful...C--->A

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 5:56:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Cupids Arrow :)for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! You're always so sweet to me, thanks!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "