Lost In Yesterday

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rain streaks broken panes the darkened soul of this house lost in yesterday

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Date: 2/12/2016 8:04:00 AM

sad senryu, well penned, excellent write there

Lin Lane
Date: 2/12/2016 8:16:00 AM

Thank you, Sage.

Date: 2/10/2016 3:36:00 AM

YES YOU CAN have as many besties as you want! Just don't typo an a in between the e and the s.......Again great Senryu

Lin Lane
Date: 2/10/2016 3:59:00 AM

haha Judy, I know a few beasts, but I would never put you in that category.

Date: 2/9/2016 4:11:00 PM

Very deep Lin. Love the word choices.

Lin Lane
Date: 2/9/2016 4:54:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Tim. Nice to see you.

Date: 2/9/2016 3:52:00 PM

Excellent

Lin Lane
Date: 2/9/2016 4:54:00 PM

Thanks so much, Judy... I guess you're another best since I just told Laura she was, but I can have two besties if I wanna.

Date: 2/9/2016 3:37:00 PM

Lin, so much said in such few words lady..I love it, very well written...*hugs* -luloo

Lin Lane
Date: 2/9/2016 4:53:00 PM

Thanks, Luloo... you're the best.