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Lost In Love

L uscious lips that slightly part reveal to my delight O ne gorgeous smile meant just for me and teeth that sparkle white. S heepishly I drop my eyes, afraid that he might guess T he sudden urge that sweeps my soul to feel his sweet caress. I nfatuation some might say! But I can only sigh. . . N ever have I felt this way for any other guy. L ong-lashed luminescent eyes are those of hazel hue O bserving me! What soulful eyes I’m looking back into! V anquished by his gaze am I. My forecast may sound grim. . . E vermore I’m lost because my heart is lost to him!

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/29/2014 9:11:00 PM

Wowee lady this is amazing! I love the way it feels to read it, such a lovely love! Brings a big smile to my face, so glad this was first place! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2014 6:20:00 AM

Nice romantic write, Andrea. congrats

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/29/2014 3:11:00 AM

A very beautiful poem Andrea! I was lost too in your work!!! ^_^ <3

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/29/2014 1:03:00 AM

I love it :) Just awesome. Love and prayers, Gina

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/29/2014 1:01:00 AM

Wow that's purely wonderful my friend Andrea! Congrats on top win!

Matt Hunt

Date: 8/18/2012 2:35:00 AM

This is wonderful!!! Great job:D

James Tate

Date: 8/10/2012 4:37:00 PM

Andrea, you have real talent expressed poetically. Keep up the good work.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/9/2012 9:27:00 PM

I'm swept away by this romantic write, Andrea! Completely lost...congrats, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/9/2012 8:55:00 PM

andrea.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/9/2012 7:14:00 PM

Puppy love!!!! Ahhhh...this is soooo fun! Congrats dearie....u wrote of a great moment! gwendolen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/8/2012 2:18:00 PM

Yes, I seem to remember this feeling so well expressed by you. Congratulations on a great poem and win, Andrea. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/8/2012 1:13:00 PM

Yep felt that way once about 30 years ago. Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/8/2012 12:56:00 PM

congrats on your win

Erich Goller

Date: 8/8/2012 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, that's a lovely poem with an romantic touch. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/8/2012 10:08:00 AM

congratulations on your win in my contest! a creative idea - loved it :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/8/2012 7:39:00 AM

congrats on your win Andrea

Joseph May

Date: 8/7/2012 9:18:00 PM

beautiful...a winner all the way...thanks for stopping by ....love...Joseph

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/6/2012 8:44:00 PM

Drunk and stumbling in an amorous haze. She gladly roams in her glorious daze. Awaiting her next taste of honey. That you just can't buy with all the worlds money.