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Lost Echoes - For Contest

Lost Echoes lost echoes wander silent valleys reverberations orphaned tones disconnected from their source long ceased – solemn call to prayer wasted on the ears of the callous dried on the clapper’s lips no need to welcome revelers invite the workers from their fields the center of their lives resides elsewhere frayed, dusty ropes hang muted no hands to give them voice soft winds and whispers fading on the fallow fields of hope dry, creaking, members bowing under toneless weight birds, undisturbed in their nesting, coo in the conic complacency of the hollow past the world is deafened now the last of the pealing bell tones - lost echoes – wandering silent valleys John G. Lawless 7/25/2015 submitted to –For whom the bell tolls – Poetry contest sponsor – Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 8/9/2015 7:28:00 PM
A sad and solemn feeling to this interesting take on the bells theme... Very nicely written, John! Congrats on your win, as well!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/10/2015 9:32:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Kelly. I have always found an eerie solace in the the tonal vibrations of bells.
Date: 8/8/2015 3:00:00 PM
So true it seems the church bells are leaving, no one to ring them, no one to listen for them to tell time. Thanks for entering. Congrad's Light & Love
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John Lawless
Date: 8/10/2015 9:30:00 PM
Yeah Debbie, I think they have an "app" for the bells now.
Date: 8/4/2015 1:11:00 AM
Brilliant take on bells John ! Congrats on big win!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/10/2015 9:30:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 12:47:00 AM
Bleak piece, I can palpably sense that feeling of abandonment. That sixth stanza is an absolute belter, John. Congrats, a #7 and a fave for me, thanks. Regards, Viv
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John Lawless
Date: 8/10/2015 9:29:00 PM
Thanks for the high mark Viv. I hated Poe's poem The Bells, probably because of the way it was presented to us in High School. This is sort of my revenge..
Date: 8/4/2015 12:32:00 AM
John, Congratulations, on your win in Debbie's contest. Love SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 8/10/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 7/25/2015 1:40:00 PM
Wow! Impressive write. Good luck in the contest. Nudershada
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John Lawless
Date: 8/10/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment on this poem Nudershad. Always nice to hear from another member of the soup.

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