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Lost and Found

Moon is to the night, As sun is to the day, Aligning only in sight, But, eclipses do not stay. Lightning exists in a cloud, The ground is miles away, Their connection can be loud, Electrifying when it may. The sun sets on the sea, But, never touches it, You shine light on me, Igniting my fire a bit. I am way down here, Wishing on a falling star, See that falling tear, You are near, yet so far. I walk a lonely road, You walk down another, Writing lost love odes, And never finding each other.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/17/2014 5:12:00 AM
Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/18/2014 11:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for the great comments! I do appreciate it, Dr. Ram.
Date: 5/16/2014 10:10:00 PM
oh my a sad one and so well constructed. I love how you did the parallels to nature in this. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/16/2014 2:18:00 AM
Delightful longing for each other wid no hope of finding ever ,, sad end ,, congrats on deserved huge win Kelly !
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/17/2014 1:15:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Dr. Upma. I appreciate it very much!
Date: 5/16/2014 12:15:00 AM
KELLY, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda
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Date: 11/21/2013 5:06:00 PM
Kelly These words touch the readers heart and make them feel the longing and desire you search for. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Love Lies poem.
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Date: 9/11/2013 3:08:00 PM
OH THAT WAS VERY SWEET AND DELIGHTFUL PIECE
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