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Feeling lost in an emotional maze anxiety saps both body and soul, stumbling blindly within a foggy haze. I stare deep into your eyes in a daze lamenting the innocence time once stole, feeling lost in an emotional maze. Impressed by flattery's flamboyant ways I ignore reality's costly toll, stumbling blindly within a foggy haze. Bullied by deceit and the tricks lust plays I cling to whatever makes me feel whole, feeling lost in an emotional maze. A pyre of doubts cannot kindle love's blaze lodged deep in my heart like a lump of coal, stumbling blindly within a foggy haze. Tangled in a web of lies and clichés, admonishing trust, I regret its role. Feeling lost in an emotional maze, stumbling blindly within a foggy haze. (Villanelle) 2/5/2016

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Date: 5/15/2018 7:19:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/7/2016 9:16:00 AM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 2/7/2016 7:57:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your placement in the Lost contest. This is a wonderful write.
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/7/2016 12:11:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest, I love your Villanelle write and your image is lovely also ~
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Broken, it was my pleasure. Emile.
Date: 2/6/2016 7:09:00 PM
wonderful villanelle Emile congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Jan, your support is reassuring. Emile.
Date: 2/6/2016 4:42:00 PM
Emile, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks LINDA, your visits are always a pleasure to receive. Emile.
Date: 2/6/2016 4:19:00 PM
Congrats Emile on your placement, a wonderful poem and well deserved..*smiles* -luloo
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/5/2016 5:16:00 PM
LOST....in the mysterious web of a Villanelle. Well done Emile
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Date: 2/5/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks John, your visits are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/5/2016 11:56:00 AM
A very well executed form, Emile! Lost in an emotional maze ... lamenting the innocence that time stole, you struggle; very expressive! // paul
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Date: 2/5/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul, I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Emile.

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