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Lost Silently I’m crying inside Inside myself, hope seems to be lost Lost and no one sees the pain Pain of love and dreams I once had Had and it came with a cost Cost I wish I could regain Regain, but the wounds are too deep Deep I can’t even understand why I’m crying Crying in this infinite dark place I shouldn’t be in In yet I’ve fallen waiting to be found in one piece Piece by piece I’m feeling alone and lost Lost and empty can’t find my way out Out I don’t know any more if I belong Belong lost and never to be found 2//3/2016 ~ Poetry Contest: Lost Sponsored by: Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/19/2016 5:29:00 PM
Better late than never,,,congrats on the contest,well deserved
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Date: 2/7/2016 7:59:00 AM
Brilliant write, Eve. Congratulations on you placement in the lost contest. A well deserving write.
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:14:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest, your poem was so emotional and truly touched me soul ~
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:27:00 PM
Such an emotional write Eve congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/6/2016 8:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, congratulations to you too!
Date: 2/6/2016 5:46:00 PM
Love how you repeated the end word..awesome. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:03:00 PM
Very emotional, Eve, and I like how your form repeats the end words to emphasise the emotions. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:42:00 PM
Eve, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:20:00 PM
Eve congrats on your placement for this contest...:) *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 2/3/2016 9:40:00 PM
Eve, you are so sweet, always replying to my comments. :)
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Date: 2/3/2016 6:13:00 PM
Very emotion felt write, Eve. Life doesn't leave much without hope.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, Hope and Love :)
Date: 2/3/2016 4:27:00 PM
A heartfelt poem, Eve, you expressed the feeling of hope well. I give your poem a high 7. Always ~LINDA~
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 5:13:00 PM
thank you dear friend :) Hugs Eve

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