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I walk through a dark an empty street With nothing but cold concrete beneath my feet The air is bitter and cold “Life is hard” from what I’ve been told Takes so long for my pain to subside So many thoughts have crossed through my mind As I walk through this path, an take a look at my life I soon realize I have nothing left My mixed emotions are running wild I feel just like a child The four walls in my room just keep on spinning Pain and emotions are tearing me up and winning My future goals have run out, or so I can see Waiting for that person to come and rescue me But as I look in the mirror, stop and stare It’s all but one person that needs to care Hold your head up high Wipe your tears, its ok to cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2016 11:25:00 AM
Crystal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/12/2011 9:52:00 AM
good job, you should hold your head up high :)
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:01:00 PM
Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Crystal. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:33:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more.
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