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sun is shining but tears in my eyes clouds are smiling and wave me goodbye rain is falling down on earth im asking myself 'why does it hurts' wind is blowing around my ears i'm asking myself 'why am i here?' sun, clouds, rain and wind they all become my closest friend ?

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Date: 1/23/2011 12:39:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 1/23/2011 11:57:00 AM
lovely write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 11:53:00 AM
From the earth we have come, and to the earth we will go. To witness the sun, clouds rain and winds, my what a show. Nice one Susann....:)
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Date: 1/23/2011 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing! Steve
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