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loss for words

what do you to say
to someone
it seems like everything
you say
makes them mad?

so I tried
to walk
even though
it hurts so much inside

I wanted to show
that i care
but maybe
you don't want me
to care
because maybe
you really don't care
about me

you practically
me out the door
with your words
and how
you won't even look
at me
I'm trying
to talk to you.

so I left,
feeling worse
than when
I started...

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  1. Date: 8/17/2011 6:09:00 PM
    Well put, but sounds to me it's over, pal. Women are like busses; another one will be along soon.

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 4:20:00 PM
    been there, and that's a tough one..TAH

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 4:14:00 PM
    Deep and emotional write. The bright side is it seems like you've done nothing wrong so nothing to feel sad about. That persons loss, not yours! A very touching entry, enjoyed reading.