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Losing You

Out of the darkness of absence came shadows of never, and the heart became silent to walk that void forever. The denseness of my emptiness chokes my very soul. The scent of love has departed, leaving a gaping hole. They say that time is a healer, but memories linger so. And the heart it carries the hurt, the hurt of letting go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2010 2:11:00 AM
Beautiful write.....Allie
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:50:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, very nice!!
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Date: 5/15/2010 8:21:00 AM
nicely done
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:38:00 AM
the second stanza was great, nice write
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:52:00 AM
There is intense pain that accompanies the void left when we lose someone we love. Very beautifully conveyed message, Daniel. Most people can relate to these feelings. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:16:00 AM
" The hurt of letting go"...............perfect!!!! Letting go does hurt so much, wonderful write! Jeralynn
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:19:00 AM
a loss of love perhaps, new love awaits, sad write, enjoyed
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Date: 5/15/2010 3:55:00 AM
Heart wrenching and very sad..Written so beautifully yet very sad.. enjoyed reading your writes Daniel.. Charma
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