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In Lancashire Dialect Lord up above in t' 'eavens, Ah've a got a few problems down 'ere, So to 'elp could tha' go seeking, T' see if tha plumbin' is leakin'? Ah'm askin' Lord , just t' mek Thee aware, There's flooding most everywhere, it's raining like mad down 'ere, Tha' knows, An' we're sick o' wearin' wet clothes. An' Lord, while ah'm on about it, Ah thought it might 'elp to ask you, If Tha's willin', gerrus a job, Ah'm sick o' this shufflin' dole queue. Me kids need some shoes t' go schoolin', The wife could do wi' a frock or two. We got nowt between us down 'ere Lord, But we share what little we got Life down 'ere ain't easy for us Lord, But we're still an 'appy lot. Folks is welcome across our threshold, They can come an' go if they please. Lord, we live a life that's simple, So, come friend, an' rest at your ease. © Dave Timperley April 2014

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Date: 6/1/2014 5:07:00 PM
This is very good and I'm glad I found it. The dialect as Dave said; is great, and I also appreciate the values it shows.. Great write.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 6/2/2014 3:46:00 AM
Ta very much Lad, it were right nice of thee to say so tha' knows. God Bless thee. D.
Date: 4/26/2014 3:42:00 PM
I love this! Simplicity is the best. I am so much happier since I downsized my life. I find I have more than enough for me and whoever else needs it. Whatever happened to bartering for what you need? Thank you for your visit to my poetry.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/26/2014 4:02:00 PM
Retired, downsized, living in a narrower style that opens a huge new world called carefree and happy. I peep in the soup when I can and comment. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/19/2014 8:01:00 PM
Oh, I like this! very cute!
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/20/2014 3:38:00 AM
Hi Toquyen, I'm a Lancashire Lad and love the dialects spoken there. Thank you for your comments. ave a great Resurrection Weekend. God Bless. D.

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