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Look at them, all lonely people
Soaking your words in churned ripple
For in dreams are born, a spiked fire;
Twisting on strings plucked by your pyre
And lines croon, rising breath’s whistle.

Spilled notes creep and rouse life’s riddle
Let it be, verse gropes in vigil
Guitars strumming peace on live wire,
Look at them.

To us you say, make life trickle
Your hands moan for visions fickle;
Telling the world love’s not for hire.
As fused pair, melodies conspire
To ignite true bliss’ desire,
Look at them.

*Rondeau form

*Lennon-Mc Cartney Tandem
*Thanks to my uncles for their Beatles passion


Contest by Michael Falotico:
What Songwriter or Writers Inspire You
5 July 2012

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  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:44:00 PM
    They were the very meaning of collaboration. Cant get enough tributes to them. Congrats on your win nette.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 11:17:00 AM
    Congrats on your first place win, Nette! You chose the greatest songwriting team of all time. Excellent write!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Hi Nette very good write about a fab couple of writers, congrats on your win in the comp, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 8:32:00 AM
    Congratulations for your win in Michael's contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 1:42:00 PM
    congratulations onyour winning poem.

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 1:02:00 PM
    Nette, congrats on your great win, David

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 11:05:00 AM
    Very nice... congratulations! Terry

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:55:00 AM
    wonderful write Nette,congratulation

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:49:00 AM
    So well done yet again!!

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:41:00 AM
    From another fan....congratulations, Nette!

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:36:00 AM
    congrats Nette luv on a splendid first place win for this great choice of artistry ..and music .. wow..

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:18:00 AM
    Congrats on your 1st place win in my Songwriter contest.... oxxo Michael

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 9:45:00 PM
    Wow, a very powerful write. I can tell you were very inspired when you wrote this Miss nette. Hence, it should serve you very well in the contest, thank you for sharing this. Loved the line "For in dreams are born, a spiked fire;" That whole line embodies so much. Best of luck.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 8:14:00 PM
    Nette, hi,,,,, i love this, I bet so will Michael,, whom i miss out here... good luck in his contest with your deep poem.. excellent poem, thank you and have yourself a good night~PD

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest..Winning material for sure..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking the time to comment on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 11:46:00 AM
    They were legends of their time, my favorite song from them is"Let It Be" I sing it on karaoke all the time, loved your poem Nette have a great day luv vie

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 11:41:00 AM
    This is a wondrous tribute to an enormous band, that will always keep their spot in history! You wrote this poem so illustriously with moments of rock inside the write! This poem is priceless Nette! Great Work my good friend!!

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:56:00 AM
    What an extraordinary tribute! I saw them live in Southport, England in 1964, when amplifiers were the size of postage stamps and the girls' screaming blotted out the sound for the most part... but I wouldn't have missed it for the world! Marvelous language and form!! Love, Keith :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Your poems always amaze and enthrall the imagination.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:05:00 AM
    Contemplative words. Good luck in the contest. Peace and blessings to you Nette.