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Lonliness

The sun is shining and the birds are singing the boys are playing and the girls are dancing the beautiful day say good morning the beautiful night say good night i think this all gonna be all right but every thing was going worse i know this all because of hers i thought she'll with me always but she left me within some days why this all happens to me is she happy after leaving me this is all so blue without you no one is with me only left are few i want you to come back in my life because without you i would never be fine

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2013 3:08:00 AM

- Hi Apoorva, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Brittney Lopez

Date: 7/5/2013 7:55:00 PM

Awesome, it's beautiful. Maybe check mine out to

Apoorva Khare

Date: 7/2/2013 7:04:00 AM

thanks to you all its my first poem and trying to improve myself pls keep commenting on my poems thanks :)

Ravi Kiran
Date: 7/5/2013 2:50:00 PM

Seems like we both started poetry because of a loss, mine was 'please brother' I can totally relate myself to your poem. Pain and Passion both are true architects of great poets. Good luck

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 4:05:00 PM

Apoorva, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/28/2013 7:02:00 PM

Hi Apoorva, a sad feeling to be without..... enjoyed dropping by :-) -WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side. Hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda