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Long Beach 2008

Long beach 2008 I miss you miss my heart stopping miss the noodles The coffee The Two Little dogs The neighbor Who said? You Look A little gray miss Not being alone Miss Dying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/2/2010 10:39:00 AM
Can feel the pain.
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Date: 2/10/2010 3:45:00 PM
Sometimes when you miss someone this much, you feel like life has no meaning. I like the way you conveyed this in your last two lines, Thomas. Beautiful write filled with longing and imagery from a time when you did not feel so alone. Hope you are recovering from this loss, Thomas. Love, Carolyn
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