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Loney, lonely day

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Loney, lonely day

My falling tears taste like the rain
Salty yet full of pain they fall
The days seem to grow so long
She no longer is in my day
Will one understand that i die inside a little each passing hour
Prolong the seconds will you not
Search in me, and you will find emptyness
I am to roam this place alone, for no matter what my hands touch it fruits not
Why do i always hurt those around me
Help, will you too read and leave
Am I to die alone, will you too look the other way
Swear you love me, and leave me?
I need you, please come back, and let's make this work
My tears fall dry, as i too die

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  1. Date: 4/29/2010 1:44:00 PM
    sad thoughts, hope you are not really sad. take care.

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 2:32:00 AM
    Very heart rendering write Edward very much enjoyed...Thank you for reading mine.....Allie

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 4:10:00 PM
    Touching and deep ..Eddie..

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 4:04:00 PM
    Sad love loss write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 4:02:00 PM
    Beautifully written and romantically touching Edward... enjoyed reading your lovely creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"