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Lonely the Interludes

keyboard chasing ripples through notes’ interludes, pounding, drowning crushed love… ebony fingers like tendrils stiffen from refrains, despair on moonless halls… blistered Dr. Ram Mehta's Cinquain Contest by nette onclaud

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:15:00 AM

I would have placed yours much higher, Nette...you created a feeling of longing without writing the word...beautiful! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:16:00 PM

Nette,, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 2:45:00 PM

Nette, very beautiful with so many emotional metaphors. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:07:00 PM

best one I have seen!! Congrats, Nette.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:41:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 8:36:00 AM

Wow Nette! This is poetically beautiful. a 7 rating for you. Congrats on your win and all the best for this new year. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 3:13:00 AM

Congrats on the win nette,this speaks volume...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 9:37:00 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, nette

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/21/2014 7:17:00 AM

beautiful Nette.. :) kahusay husay.. ! am still here.. where we go? hugs.. :)!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/21/2014 7:15:00 AM

beautiful Nette.. :) kahusay husay.. ! am still here.. where we go? hugs.. :)!

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/20/2014 4:17:00 PM

Very emotive Nette, well put together..'

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/17/2014 6:55:00 PM

Nette, Music set the poetic verse, just love it lady, it is so full of harmony and emotions great work here my friend, Happy Holidays to you my friend I hope all your dreams come true this magical season, cheri

Tim Smith

Date: 12/17/2014 5:31:00 PM

I can hear the melody playing nette...beautiful ...huggs

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 12/17/2014 4:57:00 PM

Deep and moody piece, hon. My favourite image is the chasing ripples... such a good effect of the how it was all there, perhaps already in motion and it was only the fingers job to pursue the melody... I really like that. We're all quite sick, here, but it seems to just be seasonal... awful coughs but not this scary bug that has hospitalized thousands. I have our girl on a hot air mister, steamy bathroom, vapour rubs and plenty of TLC. Gotta go. xoxox

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2014 4:33:00 PM

this flows like a marvellous melody Nette:-) Hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2014 4:01:00 PM

this is stunning, Nette. You followed not just the syllable count but the preferred way of doing number of words per line too (I think). I love this.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2014 1:31:00 PM

Very descriptive and expressive work..It is sad to play until someone gets blisters..I enjoyed reading this one today..Looks like a Christmas tree..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara