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Lonely Night

The moon hangs her mournful head like a jilted love. Tears rain... cacaphonic stars. -my first attempt at a haiku! Enjoy...

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Date: 9/1/2009 1:51:00 AM

Nice opening line Levi, great display of work here...Raul

Date: 7/25/2009 12:29:00 PM

Enjoyed your Haiku. Very expressive and descriptive. Sara

Date: 7/20/2009 11:29:00 AM

This is really beautiful, i really like it

Date: 6/20/2009 3:53:00 PM

Thats hott:p I like would totally would go but i go for the opposite sex-->So let him Be a Dude groanin' & I Drool

Date: 6/5/2009 7:47:00 PM

Very nice Levi, a great write indeed -Jessica

Date: 6/5/2009 12:20:00 PM

But not a virgin maker of imageries ... so powerful the thing upon the page ... it has no death. Glory!

Date: 6/3/2009 5:44:00 PM

very creative talent you have! Levi!!! original work!!! nice!!! Jim