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Lonely Miss

My heart still crumbles even now, Fighting to move on some how. Even with all the time that's past, The hurt inside persists to last. And as my days and nights collide, I'm drawn within myself, I hide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/29/2014 8:55:00 PM
Wow very emotional poetry here. Just know time heals all wounds.
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Date: 1/29/2014 12:46:00 AM
One of the more impressive pieces describing depression I have seen. You have good descriptiveness and rhyming in something that does not require a lot of effort to read.
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Date: 1/26/2014 7:35:00 AM
Jamie when you can like this do not hide embrace it and shout out loud, very well done....David
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Date: 1/26/2014 6:40:00 AM
Yes, this is the remembrance in life that humanbeings hide.Great writing.
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:04:00 AM
Jamie very nice but don't hide Steve
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