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Lonely

Alas, the sorrows sown upon this soul. Have met the depths of grief; I cry alone. Misfortune, friend of fate, has placed her dole. For death has taught that joy is just a loan. I think be times of days when you were here. For never was a heart so full as mine. As jubilation of sweet love drew near. And on this lonely heart your sweetness shined. Oh, emptiness that wrestles fallen dreams, All hope is lost; I have no love to give. Your death now dealt, the worst of Satan’s schemes. Regret I now, for I am left to live. God, take my pain and open Heaven’s door. That I may stay near my love evermore. Copyright January 22, 2014 By Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Shakespearian Sonnet Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: LONELINESS Sponsor: FRANK H.

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Date: 5/20/2014 9:01:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 1/24/2014 5:39:00 PM
Great write Dane... congrats on your win
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/25/2014 6:22:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. So glad you took a moment to leave a message. Happily, Dane Ann
Date: 1/24/2014 2:13:00 PM
impressive, dane.. cheers on your top win!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/25/2014 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Nette. This means a lot to me. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 1/23/2014 10:40:00 PM
Lovely sonnet ! Joy is a loan , how true!! Congrats Dane !!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/25/2014 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma Sharma for reading my sonnet and for taking time to leave your note of approval. Greatly appreciated. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 1/23/2014 8:17:00 PM
So sad and beautiful, I'm so happy to see this in such a well deserved spotlight!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/25/2014 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Carrie, for stopping by and leaving your sweet comment. I was so excited about having this win. (And I needed an uplifting after having my recently purchased car towed for diagnosis after it started making a tapping noise.) So glad to have a win and very happy to see the comments. It feels good. Hope all is well with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

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