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Loneliness In Hades

On thy flaming floor wailing, No one to comfort thee, Friends and families are no more, All alone, it's not all right, Nobody, to tell thy excuses, No one, to guide thee right, Thy tomorrow has ended, Forgotten that it will cease, one day. Thy new Earth,thou will not witness Thy sins, thy suffering..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/11/2015 8:34:00 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
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Joshua Abel
Date: 5/12/2015 4:13:00 AM
Huge THANKS to you.Sir and for stopping by
Date: 3/18/2015 11:33:00 PM
An expressive work of human sin, pain and sorrow, Joshua...well-written! Hugs, Rhonda
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Joshua Abel
Date: 3/19/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thanks for taking time to read and for the comment... *Hugs*
Date: 3/17/2015 12:31:00 PM
A touching and eloquent description of the human experience in hell. Great work! Emile. #7
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Joshua Abel
Date: 3/17/2015 3:00:00 PM
Thanks sir

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