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Loneliness

I hate being alone with myself Some people might say that Being alone affords one the "me" time That is so important for personal growth My "me" time is very destructive on my mind and body It just reminds me of how my life has been Turned upside down, destroyed by the very people I've entrusted my heart, soul, and mind to Loneliness is my silent killer... It eats away at my mind, Causing me to revisit the past experiences That have shaped me to be the person I am today Loneliness is a depressant. It makes me aware of the things I have missed out on, And the things I am missing Loneliness causes me to make desperate, destructive decisions Loneliness creates in me hate, anxiety, distrust, numbness of life... Loneliness is a silent killer If you truly have it out for me, If you want to destroy me... Leave me... "ALONE". Yes, you'll get the best of me, You can stand back and laugh at my crumbling fall. Loneliness is a silent killer An assassin of the mind A murderous beast I hate being alone with myself

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/4/2016 5:08:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, LaMont. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2016 9:43:00 PM

LaMont, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/3/2016 2:41:00 PM

- Welcome to Poetry Soup, LaMont :) - A great and powerfully poem, well done - // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/3/2016 9:03:00 AM

Lamont, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.

Lamont Atkinson
Date: 5/3/2016 2:32:00 PM

M.D., Thank you very much! I am very excited to be a part of this community. I hope to find new insights to the world around me. A journey has no meaning without someone or something to journey for!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2016 4:16:00 PM

LaMont Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lamont Atkinson
Date: 5/2/2016 5:46:00 PM

Thank you P.D. I do hope to not write to someone else's standard, but that my thoughts, ideas, and feelings come across clearly and effective. I truly thank you all for accepting me into the group and I hope to make new and exciting friends/ extended family! I also hope to be able to improve on clearly expressing and extending my thoughts and feelings to others.