Lollipop

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The transfer did not hold the original shape well. In the original, I was able to use a different font, which gave the lollipop a better shape.

You feel rather idiotic as you open wide & extend your tongue into view, but the risk of looking foolish pales as the sweet tangy taste pervades your mouth. Red flavor, swirled with lime,brings back memories of children who shared suckers, toys, lunches skates, bikes, bubblegum,& secrets. It was a gentle time of trust, love & free- dom. If you can- not tolerate the change in our world, buy your- self A G I A N T L O L L I P O P

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