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Locked In a Smile Part Iv

locked in a smile are secrets untold of how you are my heaven and how you are my hell my mind paints pictures of me loving you so well yet i wait for the day when i'm brave enough to tell wishing you felt the same that would be so swell

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/28/2012 1:16:00 PM

This poem show the torment of loving someone so deeply. I must say you have done a excellent write with this series. I am a romantic at heart and this is romantic. love phyl

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/6/2012 4:04:00 AM

These are tormentingly lovely John!! I enjoyed them very much....and sorry about all the "running around in your head" lol...thanks for the visit...big hugs, love deb

John Rhinem

Date: 5/5/2012 11:56:00 AM

Smile ˜ Sooo Much Precious Sweeet Beauty Below * The Most Beautiful Women I Have Yet To Know, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful John * I Have Completely Loved Every Honey-Dipped Word, From Your Beauty This Beautiful Day * Treasures Which Touch My Heart Deeply; Whispers, Of Beautiful Love * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

John Loving Iii
Date: 5/5/2012 4:27:00 PM

you can trust me.

Date: 5/5/2012 12:01:00 PM

...."Tickle Tickle, 'Kissy Kissy Pooh.'" *

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/5/2012 12:22:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one John, its a true situation for many i think..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2012 11:10:00 PM

it must be hell when the other one does not feel the same, john!

Date: 5/4/2012 11:14:00 PM

It is andrea

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/4/2012 8:38:00 PM

Did you ever notice in life that everyone wants what they can't have or what they know they are loosing? The best is to let them chase until you catch them. GET IT, GOT IT? May a smile in flight land on your face and forget to leave. Huggs TLee

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/4/2012 9:45:00 AM

A very good set of 'locked in a smile'. Enjoyed it so much :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/3/2012 7:52:00 PM

Hi John, I read all four of them and I agree they are separate yet each part of the whole. Beautifully penned with so much feeling to be explored. Think I'll fave these! :)

John Loving Iii
Date: 5/4/2012 11:39:00 AM

you know how sometimes you go to peoples poetry and they have a long piece so long you avoid it? this is how i fixed that problem. and yes it is one piece. thankyou

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2012 6:43:00 PM

Hi, john... right back at you... soup mail... you made me smile.. does that count.. xooxx...(soupmail)