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locked in a smile Part IV

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Below is the poem entitled locked in a smile Part IV which was written by poet John Loving III. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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locked in a smile Part IV

locked in a smile 
are secrets untold
of how you are my heaven
and how you are my hell
my mind paints pictures
of me loving you so well
yet i wait for the day 
when i'm brave enough to tell
wishing you felt the same
that would be so swell

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  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:16:00 PM
    This poem show the torment of loving someone so deeply. I must say you have done a excellent write with this series. I am a romantic at heart and this is romantic. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 4:04:00 AM
    These are tormentingly lovely John!! I enjoyed them very much....and sorry about all the "running around in your head" lol...thanks for the visit...big hugs, love deb

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 11:56:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Sooo Much Precious Sweeet Beauty Below * The Most Beautiful Women I Have Yet To Know, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful John * I Have Completely Loved Every Honey-Dipped Word, From Your Beauty This Beautiful Day * Treasures Which Touch My Heart Deeply; Whispers, Of Beautiful Love * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 5/5/2012 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you can trust me.
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    Date: 5/5/2012 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ...."Tickle Tickle, 'Kissy Kissy Pooh.'" *
  1. Date: 5/5/2012 12:22:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one John, its a true situation for many i think..

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:10:00 PM
    it must be hell when the other one does not feel the same, john!

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    Date: 5/4/2012 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is andrea
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 8:38:00 PM
    Did you ever notice in life that everyone wants what they can't have or what they know they are loosing? The best is to let them chase until you catch them. GET IT, GOT IT? May a smile in flight land on your face and forget to leave. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:45:00 AM
    A very good set of 'locked in a smile'. Enjoyed it so much :)

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 7:52:00 PM
    Hi John, I read all four of them and I agree they are separate yet each part of the whole. Beautifully penned with so much feeling to be explored. Think I'll fave these! :)

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 5/4/2012 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you know how sometimes you go to peoples poetry and they have a long piece so long you avoid it? this is how i fixed that problem. and yes it is one piece. thankyou
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:21:00 PM
    I wish there was a part v John, just wanted to read on and on, enjoyed your smiles from a to z, luv vie

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:43:00 PM
    Hi, john... right back at you... soup mail... you made me smile.. does that count.. xooxx...(soupmail)

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 4:37:00 PM
    A lovely and romantic poem, John. Hugs, catie :)

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 5/2/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you catie.