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I stare at those locks oh so red Flame buoyant hair's rare on a head It's your special spice That to touch would be nice But I'm stuck with the wife till I'm dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 6:13:00 PM
Oh hope she doesn't see this one. Joyce
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 12/9/2012 3:39:00 PM
Joyce, it's OK. We laugh about all this stuff together. If I did anything, she would throw me out of the house!
Date: 3/10/2010 7:18:00 PM
came back to this one. MY favorite I think of the more recent ones. When I have more time, I want to explore your many others and see which ones I like best. YOu are a limerick king! Luv, andrea
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 12/9/2012 3:37:00 PM
Based on your AV, this ones for you!
Date: 3/8/2010 10:20:00 PM
Like the title, Duke, quite appropriate. Well written, seeing the humor in here. Well, I've done it. I wrote my first Limerick, thanks to you. So have a look at "Days of Thunder" if you have the time, tell me what you think. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/8/2010 8:23:00 PM
Am laughing profusely at that last line.. great write Duke.. Caroline was right.. your poetry is terrific... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:25:00 AM
Chuckle, chuckle. Great testimony of your faithfulness. In the height of being tempted, you stood your ground. Keep the Limerick lines flowing to help us chuckle and look twice at situations. Sara
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Date: 2/22/2010 3:17:00 PM
get your eyes back at home! funny!
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Date: 2/22/2010 1:25:00 PM
ahahaha, I LIKE This one alot, Duke, I meant that I believed when I first came to the club, you were one of the first people I read and made a comment to . It was someone posting almost all limericks. It was probably you unless someone else here is doing many many limericks. Yes, licorce is AWESOME. Have you had licorice ice cream, it comes in black AND blue! haha. Luv, andrea
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