Lizzard Drinking Dew

The lizzard slowly Approached dew drop on leaf Saw his reflection

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James Fraser

Date: 8/12/2009 10:49:00 AM

Kool Haiku Sara, Lizards are so kool>>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/11/2009 11:30:00 AM

Interesing haiku, Sara. It made me think of the Sobe lizard drink until the last line... cute! DAS-J

Jen H.

Date: 8/11/2009 9:20:00 AM

Haiku's, sweet and short. Cute, and beautiful poem on your part! Thanks for the comment! ~Jen~

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 8/11/2009 8:24:00 AM

Love it. Thank you. I want a lizard.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/11/2009 6:52:00 AM

Love the title and the haiku is terrific.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/11/2009 6:39:00 AM

In florida so many lizards, they all react slowly with their looks, but aren't hesitant to speed with their bodies! lovely haiku, could see it well!