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Living Water

Sore feet, long lists Lost time, large bills Just to find the perfect gift That will probably break or be lost too soon Christmas parties, gift exchanges Choir concerts, ballet recitals Is this all that Christmas is? Or have we perhaps lost our focus? And in the hours spent at the mall Maybe we've forgotten why we celebrate And maybe if we'd open our eyes To what the songs are saying We might realize That the perfect gift Doesn't come from a shopping mall But is rather a lifelong impact To provide Living Water And save a life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/19/2016 1:58:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Victoria. skat
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:55:00 AM
Victoria, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:03:00 AM
Victoria, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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