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Living Things Especially Humans

I hate every living thing. Animals only have their instinct which is why some of them are extinct. The only thing they know is that they should mate and eat the reason behind them ending up in hunters’ pit. Some plants have some spiky thorn that can make all who touches, mourn. It can also contain something poisonous even though it looks edible and delicious. But I hate human beings most of all. For humans, at times, may not use their brain that can put mindless animals to shame. Some can only continuously give their love and trust, hurting themselves again and again like in their past. They can be vicious and hurtful making others feel like an idiot and a fool. Some may seem wonderful and pretty but rotten attitude is what they have, truly. Though I must say human beings are blessed. They can look as magnificent as a gorgeous buck. Luckily, they have brains so they won’t suck. They can be as sweet as the smell of carnations. And they were well-endowed with emotions. Like all flowers, people can beautifully bloom. They can be anything, maybe find a wife or groom. How I wish that ‘we’ would maximize our potential. Cause, as you can see, we, human beings, are special.

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Date: 8/27/2016 4:16:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Max, A few lines that resonate with me......How I wish that ‘we’ would maximize our potential. Cause, as you can see, we, human beings, are special. Our potential is extraordinary but to achieve takes actual self awareness, which most humans haven't experienced. Quincy
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Date: 6/23/2016 10:37:00 PM
Sorry to hear you are filled with hate. LINDA
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Date: 6/16/2016 8:55:00 AM
Max, regardless of your new post now showing up, I'd like to welcome to poetry soup.... Skat
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Date: 6/16/2016 8:10:00 AM
oops a problem with your first poem.... I'll check back later. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Max Ortiz
Date: 6/17/2016 8:38:00 AM
would you mind telling me how I should post my poems here??? thanks, btw, for welcoming me here.

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