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Living on the Sun

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Living on the Sun

If we lived on the sun,
it would always be bright,
it would never be night.

We would not count the days, 
by the nights,
but by the rays.

For every ray lost,
the heat increase. 

Until one day,
when we are no more,

and the sun is something
we do not explore

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:09:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Emily. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol