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living bliss

If i were 
a great god 
In giving you 
one wish 
tell me darling 
what would 
that wish be 
if i were in love 
say with you 
all that i would wish 
forever happiness 

In pleasing you 
every dream 
in that one wish 
sprinklings 
of happiness 
when it came true 

If I were “The Big Love” 
the granted favor above 
the forever kind of joy 
you seek, well then? 

Tell me sweet darling 
would it please you? 
this endless love in dew 
a Rose that knows of you 

If I were a great Messiah 
i’d grant you no trivial 
Just the tenders of a kiss 
Would that bring you bliss? 
 

                                                   co written with mystic rose

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  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:26:00 PM
    Vienna and you make a splendid team, this poem is so full of light and bliss! Great work!

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 3:34:00 PM
    So so very beautiful ..each verse flows blissfully to my ear dear liam and sweet Mystic Rose

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:21:00 PM
    you take me to a magical world and the imagery comes to life. Well penned with mystic in tow, lian.. grreat duet:) huggs