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Little Colt

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Little Colt

Knobby knees unfold
   Awkward & wobbling to n fro-
      The colt tries to stand,

Gently caressed by
   His dam's soft prodding nose-
       He falls down again,

Instinct pushes him
   He must try and try again-
      Moms knicker assures,

In an effort grand
   He does it! Does it right then-
      Staggering he falls....
And

As the hours pass
   The colt burns across the field-
      Mother at his heels!



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  1. Date: 3/20/2014 9:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your very fine win, Amy!!!! ^__^

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 5:02:00 AM
    Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, amy

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 4:01:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Amy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 1:02:00 AM
    Amy , Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/19/2014 10:39:00 PM
    Hey Amy, the life of a colt, how beautiful and intriguing a few moments after a few moments of facing the world.. I like this, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 10:37:00 PM
    Beautiful growth. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 8:23:00 AM
    - Sweet poem, Amy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 5:23:00 AM
    It does not take them long to learn how to run. Nicely written.

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 4:38:00 AM
    Beautiful Amy... Verlena

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    Date: 3/19/2014 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Congratulations on your win Amy in Giorgio V. Contest... Verlena