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Liquid Dreams Small R Rated

Why do you invade my dreams You come to me when I am weak Touch me with your liquid hands Pour over every part of me I am your prisoner Yet I feel free I wish to be commanded A ship on your waves Your helpless slave Rocked to my grave Taken inside of you Letting you do what you do You are ferocious You cause me to scream Water turned to steam I ache with a strange pain Yet I wish to remain Here there is no shame You are the water You quench my flame An entity with no name I know you're not real Maybe that's the appeal I can't help how I feel I release every drop As you move on top My whole body quakes I feel a distant shake I'm pulled awake The feel of you Will soon dissapear You were never really here Yet a smile remains As my memory wanes Time to get up Go to work Others ask Why the silly smirk I will not say the reason why To myself I keep this high Thankful for you My liquid lullaby

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/19/2013 7:27:00 AM

One of my absolute favorites....The words are all so well crafted to convey the essence of this experience....sensually sweet....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/3/2014 6:49:00 PM

the sensuality in this one is palpable and real. :) Another visit to this sizzling write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2013 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Eileen, I forgot I wrote this one.

Guru Jad

Date: 5/1/2013 7:37:00 AM

Wow!! You are surely a Gentleman... Your eloquence and selection of words make this poem a genuine one! Poetry is a quarter of reality mixed with a quarter of illusions added to a quarternof dreams... But we often seive our experiences and purify them in an attempt to.... many different subjective reasons! I believe your poem has touched a delicate case without scratching anything. Great job, Richard. You are amazing!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2013 7:48:00 AM

Thanks Guru Jad, I had fun writing this one.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/24/2013 6:35:00 AM

I look forward to seeing what you come up with.

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/24/2013 6:25:00 AM

I could make loads of comments on this Richard but I'm controlling myself ha ha. I'll just say you did a great job on a tricky subject and given me more confidence to enter my effort into your crazy contest. Take care, Richard.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/23/2013 3:07:00 PM

I really enjoyed this vibes RichieRichie.... thanks for visiting my works and commenting on them while was away... I do appreciate it~A.O

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2013 6:36:00 AM

My pleasure A.O

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/23/2013 12:05:00 PM

Well, may I add my comments? Just got out of class, though I did read this earlier on in the afternoon. I notice you have made changes, though I did like the original version. I agree with Becca...the flow...ooops...ok um...the choice of words was really captivating and tastefully done! Ooops! Also...my original comment? Hope the smile is still going strong! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/23/2013 1:50:00 PM

Add your comments, it's a party!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/23/2013 12:55:00 PM

;0) its nice to see so many people with a sense of humor. I wasn't sure what the reaction would be. Thanks for adding to the mix.

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 10:44:00 AM

Well....well....a bit different for ya....and I'm lovin' it....may we all wake up smiling'!!!!!!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/23/2013 9:54:00 AM

I admit I wasn't sure what to say after I read this. You are a brave one to write about this subject... haha. It's very comical (and indeed relate-able for us guys) but like Becca said it's not so extreme as to make you feel uncomfortable. I tend to smirk randomly when I'm thinking of something funny... smirking for "other reasons" is good too ;) Enjoyed this!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/23/2013 10:12:00 AM

Thanks Tim, all part of being a guy. Your comment made me smile.