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The blender of time has utilized my face as a map to find its way back home. Discombobulation is made with the wits of the desperate and the alone. To be dangling off of a cliff holding the hand of someone you do not trust. Has made me more of the man I am than any loyal or delicate love. I hold in my hand god's only command to complicate my own. And with this pride and sin inside I carve my word in bone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/20/2016 2:35:00 AM
Dear LS, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/20/2016 2:20:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Lxnnnie. :)
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Date: 4/20/2016 12:28:00 AM
Lxnnnie Rutledzh, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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