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Lines, Rewrite

My life is told in lines here the ones etched upon my face deep lines drawn in the sand storylines I wrote past years the lines rarely going straight many written over again fractured pages inked in tears stories fade without a trace wiped away by my own hand a wasted memoir is what I fear can I redeem my essential place in spirit of faith I now stand bright sliver of light shining clear a crushed being saved only by grace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/6/2011 2:37:00 PM
oh so true of us all.........
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:18:00 PM
Wonderful metaphor you have worded so well on life, Laura
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