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limbo

lost in space
standing at 
the crossroads
between Heaven
in that of hell
i stand 
a lone fiddler
from the dust
of ashes 
one breathes

a towering
heart burning inferno
which got burned
scorched hell
drawing magic
in a memory bank
now opening
the curtains
etched on 
chamber walls

i play 
a sweet tune
as the embers
begin breathing
drums begin beating
like the phoenix
a yearning inside

one soul
i arise 
from the ashes
light of love
sparkle and shine
remaining in embers
awaiting loves call

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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:41:00 AM
    This is one of those magical writes my friend. Enjoyed the read as always

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 1:08:00 AM
    I love the flowing words and you write about souls as well ~

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:41:00 PM
    very inspiring, liam.. i enjoyed the bright erergy of your work..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Great poem Liam... nicely written! Have a wonderful day, my friend!

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Ahh!! Interesting concepts that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 9:10:00 PM
    what a beautiful poem flowing from your pen...love this one :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Hey Liam Nicely penned yearning my friend.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Liam....I JUST read this. How incredible...my latest sonnet has many of these same words...Isn't that something. We were on the same brain wave....Lovely, as usual...