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Lilac Memories

On my windowsill her pitcher filled with lilacs... My heart remembers Memories are stirred... I sat on her bedspread, while she brushed my long hair Sweet fragrance of love comes in shades of purple blooms.... quilted by her hand..... __________________________________________________________________ For Francine Robert's contest "Senryu For Mom"

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Date: 5/9/2011 1:19:00 AM
Many congrats Carrie for coveted 2nd place in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:19:00 PM
Creative win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/4/2011 1:48:00 PM
Congrats my dear on your win!!!
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 11:51:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in Francine's contest;) love Wilma
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Date: 5/4/2011 11:51:00 AM
Carrie, Great to see you near the top again. Congratulations on your second place with this honored presentation. Elegant!! Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:27:00 PM
May be the prettiest ones of all. Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/3/2011 10:42:00 PM
just charming on all counts, carrie... all senses are alive! happy congrats for the shining win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/3/2011 9:06:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your 2nd place win in Francine's contest with this tender and touching entry luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:49:00 PM
Some of the most lovely senryu ever Carrie. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/3/2011 6:22:00 PM
congratulations on your win. cory
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Date: 5/3/2011 5:34:00 PM
this is just beautiful, congrats on your second place win in the contest
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:00:00 PM
Super smiles as I read this! I can really picture this loving image in my mind-- what a very beautiful tribute & memory of your mom :) just love it! hugs to you :D
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Date: 4/26/2011 2:39:00 PM
I loved this tender, touching write
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:58:00 AM
A most beautiful and warm, touching piece you wrote here Carrie, really enjoyed reading this, makes one feel so at ease, showing a tender love for your dear mother.
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Date: 4/26/2011 9:45:00 AM
Carrie, purple is spiritual colour....just right for love so divine. Winning wishes for Roberts contest. Many thanks for liking my work,'I am bored with poetrysoup' and supporting my views. Idea is to seek more fair play rather than hurting anyone. Its against bad system not against Members per se. And also for bad apples who tend to misuse system...... I have in fact received good support & love from many Premium Members. No offence intended. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/26/2011 9:44:00 AM
Reads like winners' circle for sure..Enjoyed reading your loving thoughts about your mother..Good luck...Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a kind review..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:39:00 AM
Touched me deeply, dear Carrie. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:44:00 AM
Very touching write Carrie.Love it.Best wishes---kashinath
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:44:00 AM
Excellent.......
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:17:00 PM
Very moving and beautifully written, Carrie. I can tell how much you loved her. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:51:00 PM
this is not showing up on the contest page as entered, please check and re-enter Carrie
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:31:00 PM
Awesome piece.
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