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Like Salt It Pours

Ocean waters now white capping Cool breeze 'pon the shore Every plant drips rain water Then like Morton salt pours Thursday, June 06, 2013

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2013 1:51:00 PM

wow...creatively done with allusions to Morton lime frost...grrreat one, sara..:) huggs

John Posey

Date: 6/23/2013 5:17:00 AM

I can always find the genius of Sara somewhere in the Soup... I really enjoy your talented entries.... Hugs.... Jake

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/22/2013 4:54:00 PM

Hi Sara; This is short, but beautiful I love it. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Gail Debole

Date: 6/22/2013 9:45:00 AM

The title drew me right in...and the imagery boosted my mind. Really like this!

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/22/2013 9:07:00 AM

Beautiful...........:)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/21/2013 11:34:00 PM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed it. Tfs

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/21/2013 6:11:00 PM

This is a tremendous and superior write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a lovely piece, a descriptive poem, Great Work!!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2013 1:41:00 PM

will have to Google Morton - love the poem, anyway, my friend

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/21/2013 10:22:00 AM

Oh, my! Exemplary! Kudos for the Morton reference! :)