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wildfire grips highland like rolled furnace exploding sparklers on night air glares of blazed ecstasy crackle leaves wear soot while trees cough ashen blasts For Debbie's Haiku Wannabees by nette onclaud Form: lune--5/3/5 WORDS perline

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Date: 6/12/2013 3:50:00 PM
Nice and lovely write,Nette..Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 6/12/2013 1:39:00 AM
Congrats, nette, on the 3rd place, it deserves!! Jag
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Date: 6/11/2013 7:12:00 PM
Congrats! 3rd place
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Date: 6/11/2013 6:45:00 PM
Great work Nette.. congrats. BG
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Date: 6/11/2013 6:36:00 PM
Outstanding imagery Nette. Congratulation on your win. Connie
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Date: 6/11/2013 6:14:00 PM
Very evocative writing, and wonderful imagery. Congratulations on the win... Jack
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Date: 6/11/2013 5:06:00 PM
I feel the heat.....just reading these wonderful descriptions!! Great work!
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Date: 6/11/2013 4:01:00 PM
Loved the personification! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2013 6:52:00 AM
Very appropiate description of contest photo:Lov this!Down with fever.....aaagh.......
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:32:00 PM
A fiery crackling freeverse for which thumbs up n kudos poetess. Hope u read mine too.
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:37:00 PM
You have expressed what fire can do very nicely with this awesome write! Wildfires are very dangerous, I don't want to be near any of them ever! You have written a masterfully wondrous poem here my friend! I loved reading it this evening, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:05:00 PM
Such a powerful punch of imagery and feeling in just a few short lines! Masterfully written :)
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Date: 6/5/2013 11:55:00 AM
Some expressive lines here. Don't play with fire, you will get burned. Awesome work!
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:58:00 AM
- Very well written, Nette - A big "bear hug" to you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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