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Devastated by your lies I’m left reeling from their sting. And so, numbed by betrayal I can’t feel another thing. You swore you’d never hurt me but you're just like all the rest. And it feels like you reached in and tore my heart from my chest. I made a wish on a star so that I might yet awake. And escape this nightmare dream for it's more than I can take. Sadness saturates my soul quietly smothering me. And entombed within a tear all thoughts of love cease to be. (Quatrain) 10/15/2015

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Date: 5/12/2018 11:01:00 PM
I particularly love your last two lines, Emile. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Line, for all of your continued support. Emile.
Date: 10/16/2015 5:31:00 PM
G'day Emile... once again, nicely written with a beaut flow - plenty can find themselves in your poem Emile - Lindsay
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Date: 10/17/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/16/2015 12:09:00 AM
Well penned Emile, haven't been around as much as I would like these days! Just catching up, wrote a blog in the mean time! Great poem!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/16/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Arthur, your visits are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 10/15/2015 9:31:00 PM
BEEN THERE TOO MANY TIMES AS A YOUNG MAN.. And a ripped out heart takes a powerful lot of healing to ever go back in and function well. Had mine ripped out 6 times decades ago. Great poem--super 7 from me..
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Date: 10/16/2015 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your friendly comments and the encouragement you have shown me. Emile.
Date: 10/15/2015 7:38:00 PM
What a vivid imagery flow of the pain we all endure..till the thoughts cease, jill
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/16/2015 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Jill, I appreciate your comments and encouragement. Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs