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Like a Moth

LIKE A MOTH Like a moth Was I drawn to your Passion’s flame, Once my wings burnt, Unable was I to fly away Thus A happy prisoner of your Love Since then remain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 APRIL 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2013 6:50:00 PM

I love it when men fall like prisoners.. I think i got myself one... and it's been over 3 years... ;-) .. Have yourself a nice one, always & forever* Linda"

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/11/2013 10:18:00 AM

You are a very romantic man, Demetrios! :) This is a lovely poem!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/11/2013 11:47:00 AM

Dear Eileen, if someone is inspired it is not difficult to be romantic! Thank you for your comment!

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/11/2013 5:42:00 AM

I just love the passion of this tender write my friend! I believe your intricate poem is so wondrous I am in awe of its splendor! I am impressed with this delightful piece, you have put harmony with my soul with this incredible poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/11/2013 11:48:00 AM

My dear Russell, Thank you so much for your generous comment!