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Like a Machine Gun

That moment when you think it'll be a silent fart And it comes out like a machine gun giving your heart a start Knocking over strangers Not realizing the danger Turning their hair white and creating a new part © Jack Ellison 2016

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Date: 2/8/2016 10:27:00 AM
Geeze... When you do it... You go ALL THE WAY! Hubby says it sounds like a tippical morning to him... But I say... You should remember my words about giving up the pickles and HOT peppers... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/8/2016 10:34:00 AM
WOW! I am honoured dear Carol! Love, Jack xox
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Carol Eastman
Date: 2/8/2016 10:28:00 AM
PS. I put this one in my FAV list... LOL... Really!
Date: 2/5/2016 6:36:00 PM
lol you old witty fart I love it
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2016 9:50:00 PM
That'll be me!!!!!! LOL
Date: 2/5/2016 1:38:00 PM
Pull my finger I'll give you a treat....oh no I have soiled my seat...the stench is so bad....I bet you are glad....again we never shall meet
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2016 5:24:00 PM
That "pull my finger" old groaner!!! LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2016 1:41:00 PM
Think I can smell it from here... an south easterly breeze!!!
Date: 2/5/2016 7:17:00 AM
Stay off the grocery aisles........
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2016 7:21:00 AM
SOUND advice!!! xxx

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